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David McGuinty

Liberal on Military Justice System Modernization Act 2026-05-04

130 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)

“Mr. Speaker, it is important to recognize how we have enhanced our military, whether it is increasing their budget to 2% of GDP or providing support for CAF members. Just recently the minister made an announcement of 7,000-plus new applications to join the forces. It is all about credibility. The minister sees the value of bringing forward this legislation. I am disappointed that the Conservative Party of Canada is now in opposition to it. It is interesting, because two weeks ago I did not hear the Conservatives crying about it or saying that they were going to oppose the legislation. It is coming back to the House and now they have taken the position of having the full intention of debating it endlessly so that it does not pass. My question is for the minister. In terms of continuity and reinforcing confidence in the forces, this is one of the reason why—”

Statement grade

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Average 88 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Claims 33%Promise 14%Reasoning 48%Thanks 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 5 wordswe have made a decision. Promise · 14 wordsWe are going to be rebuilding, rearming and reinvesting in the Canadian Armed Forces.Off point Reasoning · 23 wordsInherent in that rebuilding, rearming and reinvesting is the important question of bolstering trust in the military justice system by providing legal clarity, Claims · 21 wordsas recommended by Justice Arbour, ¹and by enhancing the independence of key military justice actors, as recommended by former Justice Fish.² Promise · 4 wordsWe are moving forward.Vague promise Thanks · 6 wordsThe member makes an important point.Thanks Claims · 17 wordsThe Canadian Armed Forces and all the work that we are doing there begins with our people. Reasoning · 40 wordsWe need to make sure they can work in a safe, transparent, robust workplace.Partly on point If there are challenges, members of the armed forces need to know that the legal system that is there to protect them will in fact work.

At a glance

Lost points for

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What the tags mean

Signal · 93

1 of 6 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “The member makes an important point.”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · 66

4 of 6 deductions are Relevance

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the point put to the member, and the motion under debate.

Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “we have made a decision.”A bare statement of decision that on its own addresses neither the bill nor the motion.
Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “We are going to be rebuilding, rearming and reinvesting in the Canadian Armed Forces.”About rebuilding and funding the armed forces generally, not the military justice changes in Bill C-11.
Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about.What the tags mean “The Canadian Armed Forces and all the work that we are doing there begins with our people.”About the armed forces’ people generally, touching the bill’s subject only in passing.
Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about.What the tags mean “We need to make sure they can work in a safe, transparent, robust workplace.”About workplace safety in the forces broadly, not a specific provision of the bill or the time allocation.

Respect · 100

0 of 6 deductions are Respect

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Nothing lost points.

Clarity · 95

1 of 6 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible.What the tags mean “We are moving forward”A first-person commitment with no actor, measure, date or success condition.

Claims · 2

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“as recommended by Justice Arbour”Justice Arbour made recommendations related to military justice.search
2“as recommended by former Justice Fish.”Former Justice Fish made recommendations regarding the military justice system.search

Analysed on 2026-10-20