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David McGuinty

113 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Patrick Bonin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, as I mentioned earlier, there is officially a new dynamic at play, and the government is being rather arrogant, or blatantly arrogant, even. There is no longer any point in speaking in committee because we are not getting any answers. There is a new government that secured a majority with the help of defectors, including an NDP MP. Among other things, this MP was one of the lawmakers who worked on amendments to this bill. Some of these amendments were very constructive and improved the bill, but the Liberals removed some of them for no reason, simply because they have given themselves the right to do whatever they want now and to disregard the will of the people who elected us to represent them and work together. I would like the government to explain to me why it refuses to respect the will of the committee and all the concerted effort that went into producing a better bill for Canadians.”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Reasoning 25%Positioning 12%Claims 58%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 28 wordsbringing about a cultural shift is not only the right thing to do; it is also essential to meeting our operational needs in the area of national security. Positioning · 13 wordsThis is not at all a partisan issue, and the member knows it.Positioning Claims · 65 wordsWe introduced Bill C-11 to enshrine the main recommendations of Justices Arbour and Fish in the legislation and to restore victims’ and survivors’ confidence in the armed forces.2 Justice Arbour’s fifth recommendation involves removing the Canadian Armed Forces’ jurisdiction over the investigation and prosecution of Criminal Code sexual offences.1 That is exactly what we have proposed and that is exactly what we we are doing.3 The ask · 7 wordsWe hope to have our colleagues’ support.Partly on point

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