“Mr. Speaker, this is another truly sad day for our democracy and our democratic institutions. The decline in democracy is continuing with the Liberal government. The defence minister keeps referencing the Arbour report. That report was established almost seven years ago and only five years ago did the government start implementing any of the recommendations in the report. We have had all this despite the fact that seven years later, things have changed significantly. We had CAF members, stakeholders and veterans all come to committee and talk about this, yet the government continues to ignore the voices of those who know better than government what types of systems should be in place and it is gutting every committee recommendation. Is it not true that the government only wants an audience, not an opposition?”
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 80. The grade is held to 69, 30 above Relevance.
69 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 85%Positioning 15%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 57 wordsmaybe in conclusion I could remind the member that the chief of the defence staff, in her previous position, spoke to 14,000 individuals.1I am not sure where he is deriving his numbers from.As a result of that as well, Madam Justice Arbour actually conducted one of the deepest commissions of inquiry in this whole area.Partly on pointPositioning · 16 wordsThe member knows better than to hurl this kind of invective.It is not like him.PositioningOff pointClaims · 35 wordsAs a result of that, I think what we should do is remind ourselves that this is about enhancing trust.That is what Bill C-11 will do and that is why we are moving forward.Partly on point