Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 70%Thanks 21%Positioning 8%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 100 wordslast week, we lost Dr. Juliet Daniel, a remarkable scientist, mentor and leader whose legacy will live on.1Born in Barbados, she came to study at Queen’s University and she earned her Ph.D. at UBC.2She went on to become a full professor at McMaster University and a respected voice in her field.3I had the privilege of meeting her in Ottawa where she spoke about her research on triple negative breast cancer, which disproportionately affects Black women.4Her discovery of the gene Kaiso, named after a type of calypso music, was a significant contribution to understanding how cancer spreads.5Thanks · 9 wordsI give my heartfelt condolences to her loved ones.ThanksPositioning · 12 wordsDr. Daniel’s time on earth was like a comet: brief yet unforgettable.PositioningThanks · 21 wordsThough our time together was short, I wish her eternal peace.May her legacy continue to inspire women and researchers everywhere.Thanks