“Mr. Speaker, I think in terms of the background of former chief justice Arbour and the work that she conducted. We are not talking hundreds but likely going to 1,000-plus consultations, both direct and indirect. She is an incredible woman who is recognized for human rights beyond Canadian borders and who ultimately came up with this recommendation. I suspect that in all the consultation with former and current CAF members, she came up with a recommendation that she truly believed was in the forces’ best interest. That is what the legislation would put into place. I am wondering if the Bloc would see that maybe we should be giving her more recognition for the work that she did.”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 54 wordsas I mentioned, the Bloc Québécois’s proposal was in line with what Justice Arbour had recommended, while also taking into account the requests of several victims who appeared before the committee.3However, the work done by Justice Arbour, who also appeared before the committee at the time regarding Bill C-66, dates back five years.12Reasoning · 35 wordsThe context may have changed since then.It would have been nice to hear from her again in committee, but she would not necessarily have had the opportunity to interview new members of the forces.Partly on pointProcedure · 3 wordsIn any case, ProcedureClaims · 30 wordsas I mentioned, the Bloc Québécois’s proposal was in line with Justice Arbour’s recommendations, but it allowed for a choice in cases where it applied at the request of victims.Positioning · 8 wordsIt was a thoughtful, non-partisan and balanced proposal.PositioningClaims · 16 wordsWhat is so absurd today is seeing the government undermine all the committee’s work on this.Partly on point