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Ginette Lavack

133 words · 8 sentences · 12 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 94 wordstoday on Red Dress Day, we honour the memory of missing and murdered indigenous women, girls and two-spirit people. Across the country, and especially in Manitoba, this tragedy continues to affect families, communities, and entire generations. Every red dress represents a life, a story, and a profound loss. Last fall, I had the honour of attending the announcement of the Manitoba red dress alert pilot project, led by the group Giganawenimaanaanig, 1which means “we all take care of them”.2 This important initiative reflects the commitment of communities to raising awareness, commemorating and advancing justice. Reasoning · 8 wordsWhile this work is essential, much work remains. Promise · 23 wordsWe must continue working in partnership with indigenous communities to end this national crisis and ensure the safety of indigenous women and girls.Vague promise Claims · 8 wordsToday, we remember, we listen and we act.

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