“Wow, Mr. Speaker. Canada’s prosperity depends on the high-speed rail project and our young people will be the ones to benefit from it, but in the meantime, we have a problem. They are living in poverty and struggling to make ends meet. The fact of the matter is that Canadians are struggling because the cost of living is too high and the Liberals are continuing to impoverish law-abiding taxpayers. Let us not be fooled. The deficit has risen exponentially on this Liberal Prime Minister’s watch. Will he finally admit that these half measures on the fuel tax are not enough? Why is this Liberal Prime Minister more interested in protecting his tax revenue than in—”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 74. The grade is held to 66, 30 above Relevance.
66 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 65%Positioning 13%Promise 22%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 39 wordsit is true that just a week ago, in the spring economic update, we announced an investment of $6 billion to recruit, train and hire 100,000 skilled trades workers in Canada.1That includes Quebec.Partly on pointWe are building major projects.Positioning · 8 wordsWe are building Canada strong across the country.PositioningOff pointPromise · 13 wordsWe will continue to provide career opportunities for young people for the future.Partly on pointVague promise