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David McGuinty

112 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to James Bezan (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the defence minister told Canadians that he fixed the recruitment crisis, but like everything with these Liberals, it was just another illusion. A leaked military memo tells a very different story. Some recruits were unable to communicate in either official language, and there are damning reports of misogyny and racism. This is more Liberal mismanagement and more of the same. These Liberals did not fix the military; they lowered the bar so low and hoped nobody would actually notice. When will the minister stop ignoring the facts and admit that his recruitment reforms have failed?”
Statement grade
C
Average 64 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 30%Claims 41%Reasoning 14%Promise 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsno matter how hard we try on this side of the House, we could never be nearly as negative as this member.PositioningOff point Claims · 15 wordsThe truth is that the Canadian Armed Forces recruitment has just hit a 30‑year high.1Unearned certainty Positioning · 12 wordsOur soldiers, our sailors and our aviators do important and incredible work, PositioningReasoning · 16 wordsand we need more of them.Partly on point That is why we have been reinvesting in our people.Vague promise Claims · 31 wordsWe have given our forces a well-deserved pay raise.2 We are getting them the tools, the weapons, the equipment and the housing they need.Vague promise We are getting them through training faster.Vague promise Promise · 16 wordsWith the good help of the women and men in uniform, we are just getting started.Partly on pointVague promise

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