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David McGuinty

91 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to James Bezan (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the minister can sit here and spin his numbers all he wants, but he fails to mention that he actually knew that basic training success rates have fallen down to 77%. It is so bad that one platoon graduated only 48% of its recruits. A military that cannot graduate its recruits, cannot integrate its members and cannot maintain basic standards is not a military that is ready to defend our country. When will the Liberal defence minister stop prioritizing his press releases over the operational effectiveness of the Canadian Armed Forces?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 82%Procedure 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 26 wordsevery single measure brought before this House, every single measure for the improvement of the Canadian Armed Forces, was blocked by that member and his party.1Off point Procedure · 5 wordsHere is the good news.Procedure Claims · 49 wordsRecruitment has hit a 30‑year high.2 These are the facts.Unearned certainty In the past year, applications have more than doubled, to over 45,000.3 The CAF enrolled 7,310 regular force members, surpassing our target, 4and 70 of the 97 critical roles, 5as opposed to 18 last year, have now been filled. Procedure · 11 wordsAs I said a moment ago, we are just getting started.ProcedureVague promise

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