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David McGuinty

79 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, unfortunately, that answer is absolutely meaningless. It is important to understand that, between 2022 and 2025, 192,000 Canadians wanted to enroll but only 15,000 were accepted. Meanwhile, the government recruited permanent residents, non-Canadians and people who do not speak English or French and enrolled them in officer courses. How can we keep our country safe when we rely on people who do not understand our culture, do not understand our language and do not want to listen to orders from women? Can we get an answer on that?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 37%Claims 59%Positioning 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordswe have good news for Canada, good news for the Canadian Armed Forces and good news for the member.Procedure Claims · 6 wordsRecruitment is at a 30-year high.1 Positioning · 3 wordsHe knows that, PositioningPartly on pointProcedure · 5 wordsand here are the facts.Procedure Claims · 35 wordsOver the past year, the number of applicants has more than doubled, to over 45,000.2 We recruited 7,310 regular force members, surpassing our target.3 In addition, 70 of the 97 critical roles have been filled.4Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsWe are just getting started.ProcedureVague promise Claims · 6 wordsThere is work to be done.Partly on point

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