Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jacques Ramsay

169 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
C
61 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 11%Anecdote 31%Claims 35%Positioning 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 19 wordstoday I want to welcome to Parliament the grade six students from the École Jean XXIII in La Prairie.1Greeting Anecdote · 53 wordsI have seen their eyes light up. They are curious. They want to learn. They are interested in democracy and want to contribute to making Canada a sovereign country. We chatted about the work we do here in Parliament, about the bills that have had or will have positive effects on their lives.Anecdote Claims · 59 wordsWe talked about programs like the Canada groceries and essentials benefit, through which families will receive $1,900 this year.2 We also talked about the national school food program, 3which ensures that children have a full belly so they can learn, and the support for skilled trades programs, which will help them find a good job when they are older. Positioning · 38 wordsLet us have faith in the future. One day, a young person, like the students from École Jean XXIII, will sit in my seat and take up the torch so that Canada remains a fair and inclusive country.Positioning

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