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Julie Dabrusin

89 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Christine Normandin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, today we learned that the Liberals have decided to speed up pipeline construction by cutting red tape: too many rules, too much hemming and hawing, too much focus on reducing greenhouse gases and social acceptance. Canada has oil, so we are going to make a fortune, and to heck with the regulations. The Conservatives are losing the battle for the hearts of oil lovers. Soon enough, the Liberals will be the ones wearing “I love oil and gas” pins. If there is a single Liberal left who believes in the environment, what on earth are they doing in this party?”
Statement grade
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Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 11%Promise 25%Claims 52%The ask 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordsI must say this again, as I do every time: ProcedurePromise · 16 wordsOur government is committed to continuing the fight against climate change and to protecting the environment.Vague promise Claims · 46 wordsWe have a nature strategy.1 It is a major investment in our country’s future. We have introduced methane regulations.2 This is something that people in other countries are looking at and admiring; they are saying that Canada is ahead of the curve and is a leader. Promise · 6 wordsWe will continue doing our job.Vague promise The ask · 11 wordsI hope our colleagues will look at this and support us.

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