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Nathalie Provost

88 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Richard Martel (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is an important question. If the Liberals truly want to help families and seniors, then they should start by closing the open bar in Ottawa. The Prime Minister is being irresponsible with Canadians’ money. The interest on the Liberal debt will cost more than $53 billion this year. That is money that is not going to seniors, that is not helping families and that is not going to the public service. While Canadians have to trim their budgets just to get by, why is the Prime Minister refusing to cut back on bureaucracy and unnecessary spending?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 28%Claims 65%Positioning 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsin that case, I will continue to talk about what is not an illusion for Canadians.ProcedureVague promise Claims · 9 wordsThe child benefit provides $8,000 per child per year.1 Positioning · 6 wordsIt is important. It is useful.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsCanadians are seeing the results, because we are going through a tough time.Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsI just talked about groceries.Procedure Claims · 14 wordsWith the Canadian dental care plan, nearly 18,500 people are saving $800 a year.2Partly on point Procedure · 4 wordsThat is the reality.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 21 wordsThat does not even include everything we are doing with major projects because we have to invest for the long term.Partly on point

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