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David McGuinty

90 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Greg McLean (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Minister of Defence signed a $200‑million contract for access to a spaceport that the company itself leases for just $14,000 a year. That is $20 million a year for a decade. Worse, the contract is backdated by a full year when no lease was being negotiated and while the company’s own auditor warned it may be bankrupt. After the deal was signed, the company’s stock surged and a well-connected Liberal insider cashed out for millions. Will the minister explain how this is not another multi-million-dollar boondoggle rewarding friends while taxpayers carry all the risk?”
Statement grade
B+
80 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 12%Claims 88%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsneedless to say, the premise of the question is frankly stupid.Positioning Claims · 79 wordsEstablishing Canadian sovereign space launch capabilities will drive billions in investments. It is going to create good-paying jobs. It will increase Canada’s sovereignty. It will reduce our reliance on the United States. It is going to support a commercial space launch and re-entry industry that could be worth up to $40 billion.1 That is what we are investing in. These are the essential capabilities that protect Canada and create massive economic benefits for Canadians, coast to coast to coast.Partly on point

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