“Mr. Speaker, let me explain “stupid” to the minister. He gifted $20 million, backdated to a company on the brink of bankruptcy. The company’s chairman, someone with a history of securities infractions, made millions on a quick pump-and-dump sale of shares. The lease that taxpayers are paying for is nowhere in the company’s previous regulatory filings. The company’s Liberal insiders met with officials 158 times. Someone is going to face the music here. Will it be the Liberal insiders who were stuffing money into their jeans or the minister who signed this God-awful document?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 60. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 22%Claims 45%Positioning 33%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 17 wordsthe interesting thing about all this commentary coming from the other side of the floor is this.ProcedureClaims · 35 wordsEvery single measure put forward to strengthen the Canadian Armed Forces, every single investment in housing, in equipment, in munitions, in our bases, in our housing stock; every single one, including pay increases, was opposed.1Positioning · 26 wordsI am not sure what these people stand for anymore, and it is becoming very apparent to the women and men of the Canadian Armed Forces.PositioningOff point