“Mr. Speaker, air show organizers across North America are quietly being told that this is the final season of the iconic Snowbirds. I wrote the Minister of National Defence almost six months ago, asking about the future of the Snowbirds. There was no reply. Senator Batters did the same in the Senate. Crickets. Tomorrow is the Snowbirds “acceptance show” in Comox. Why will the Liberals not come clean about their decision to cancel the iconic Snowbirds and when will they reverse this terrible decision?”
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Claims 67%Positioning 11%Promise 22%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 24 wordsthe RCAF’s fleet of Tutor aircraft was first introduced in the 1960s.1The fleet will reach its end of life in the coming years.Positioning · 4 wordsThe member knows this.PositioningPromise · 19 wordsThe Snowbirds will continue air demonstrations with the Tutor fleet for as long as it is feasible and safe.Vague promisePositioning · 6 wordsThe member knows that as well.PositioningClaims · 35 wordsThe Snowbirds remain committed to their performances.As we have stated, we are beginning the process of examining potential aircraft options for the Snowbirds’ mission once the CT‑114 Tutor fleet reaches its end of life.2