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David McGuinty

Liberal on National Defence 2026-05-07

84 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Fraser Tolmie (Conservative)

“Mr. Speaker, jet noise is the sound of freedom, not white noise. Canadians want to be inspired by other Canadians. Do members know how we got the second female Snowbird pilot? It is because a flame was planted in her heart at the age of 12 when she saw the first female Snowbird pilot. Why are the Liberals hiding the fact that they plan to cancel the Snowbirds after the season, and why will they not immediately reverse this terrible decision? It is SOS time: Save our Snowbirds.”

Statement grade

Average 75 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Procedure 19%Claims 23%Positioning 29%The ask 30%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsI share the member’s concerns about the future of the fleet.Procedure Claims · 13 wordsIt is an iconic part of Canadian culture. He and I would agree.Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsHowever, here is the difference.Procedure Positioning · 24 wordsThis member surely cannot be suggesting that he is going to put the pilots, the women and men of that fleet, in harm’s way.Positioning The ask · 21 wordsHave him stand up and make it plain that he intends to have pilots flying planes that should not be flown, Motive imputedClaims · 6 wordswhich are under mechanical watch today.¹ The ask · 4 wordsHave him explain that.

At a glance

Lost points for
Personal attackThis statement targeted a person rather than their actions or views: “he intends to have pilots flying planes that should not be flown”.

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What the tags mean

Signal · 47

3 of 6 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “I share the member’s concerns about the future of the fleet.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “However, here is the difference.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “This member surely cannot be suggesting that he is going to put the pilots, the women and men of that fleet, in harm’s way.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · 88

2 of 6 deductions are Relevance

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the question asked.

Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about.What the tags mean “It is an iconic part of Canadian culture.”Praises the fleet’s cultural status without addressing the cancellation claim.
Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about.What the tags mean “He and I would agree.”Common ground with the member, but says nothing on the decision asked about.

Respect · 64

1 of 6 deductions are Respect

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Claiming to know a person’s bad motives.What the tags mean “he intends to have pilots flying planes that should not be flown”It attributes to the member a personal intent to endanger his pilots, presented as fact rather than as a critique of his position.

Clarity · 100

0 of 6 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Nothing lost points.

Claims · 1

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“under mechanical watch today”The RCAF’s CT-114 Tutor fleet, flown by the Snowbirds, is under mechanical watch today.search

Analysed on 2026-10-20