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David McGuinty

83 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, one symbol that unites all Canadians from coast to coast to coast is the Snowbirds, but my colleagues from Saskatchewan have now asked the Minister of National Defence four questions, and his only answer is that to suggest the program should not be cancelled is to put pilots’ lives in danger. What have the Liberals been doing for the past 11 years? They have known for quite some time that something needed to be done, and now the Snowbirds are in danger. Does the minister have anything to tell us other than this nonsense?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 69 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 5%Claims 37%Positioning 31%Promise 27%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordshere are the facts.Procedure Claims · 24 wordsThe RCAF’s fleet of Tutor aircraft was first introduced in the 1960s.1 The fleet will reach its end of life in the coming years. Positioning · 13 wordsThe member knows that and he has known that for a long time.PositioningOff point Promise · 22 wordsThe Snowbirds will continue air demonstrations with the Tutor fleet for as long as it is feasible and safe to do so.Vague promise Claims · 7 wordsThe Snowbirds remain committed to their performances. Positioning · 13 wordsThe member knows that. We are continuing to carry out our good work.PositioningOff pointVague promise

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