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Sherry Romanado

94 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Rhonda Kirkland (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I appreciate the words coming from the parliamentary secretary, and I can agree with some of them. As a woman, I know that women are more predominantly the victims of sexual misconduct and sexual assault, so this bill means something to me. However, for women and all victims and survivors of sexual assault, the thing that is taken from them is choice at that time. I would suggest that this bill would also remove choice for those folks who want choice in how justice is continued for their case. In addition, she said that this was non-partisan. It is my understanding that the Conservatives, the NDP and the Bloc put forward amendments that were passed and that the Liberals have rejected. I would like to understand that as well.”
Statement grade
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Average 100 / 100
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Reasoning 84%Claims 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 19 wordswith respect to the question of choice, victims and survivors deserve legal clarity, transparency and trust in the process. Claims · 15 wordsJustice Arbour herself called the victim’s choice between military and civilian courts a false choice.1 Reasoning · 60 wordsThis is because we would be placing a burden on the victim in a time of stress and trauma to choose between two unequal options. Asking victims and survivors to choose between two unequal options, one of which has the potential for chain of command interference in a Criminal Code case, does not provide victims with clarity, transparency or certainty.

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