“Mr. Speaker, yesterday, the defence minister was covering for cancelling the Snowbirds by telling Canadians the planes were unsafe, but according to CBC reporting, his own defence department says the Snowbirds can continue flying the jets until at least 2030. Who are Canadians to believe, the minister or his own department? Does the minister not have confidence in his own department, or did he mislead this House yesterday?”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 64 / 100
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Procedure 36%Promise 32%Claims 32%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI think I have been pretty clear: ProcedurePromise · 16 wordsThe minister is going to be in Moose Jaw on May 19 to provide an update.1Partly on pointProcedure · 11 wordsI invite the members opposite to stay tuned for that announcement.ProcedureClaims · 16 wordsAs we said, Canadians will continue to enjoy the iconic Snowbirds program for decades to come.Partly on pointVague promise