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Yves Perron

90 words · 5 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, we heard a lot about the consultations that have taken place. I would refer the member to Justice Arbour’s report and the amount of work involved in the presentation of that report. I have made reference to the 48 recommendations in total, of which I believe three dozen have been implemented. The essence of this bill deals with one specific recommendation that is based on literally hundreds if not, indirectly, thousands of individuals, CAF members and others. I believe it is the right recommendation. What are the member’s thoughts with regard to that specific recommendation where we would transfer cases from the military to the civilian court?”
Statement grade
B
78 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 27%Procedure 7%The question 32%Reasoning 30%Positioning 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 4 wordswe agree on that, Procedure · 6 wordsas I said in my speech.Procedure The question · 29 wordsThe question I asked my colleague opposite, to which I have not yet received an answer, is the following: 1Why not retain the flexibility to give victims a choice? Reasoning · 27 wordsIn any crime, in any unfortunate event that can happen, the most important person is the victim. That person’s choice and free will should always come first. Positioning · 4 wordsI do not understand, PositioningClaims · 20 wordsand I imagine that my colleague does not have an answer for me because he did not give me one.Partly on point

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