Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 65%Aside 11%Thanks 19%Anecdote 5%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 43 wordshe was a passionate advocate for social justice, a wise and thoughtful theologian, and a compassionate and caring rabbi.However, for me, Arthur Bielfeld was mostly my dear friend of 40 years, my mentor and teacher as a colleague in ministry, my supporter, Aside · 12 wordsand an occasional thorn in my flesh as a member of Parliament.AsideClaims · 80 wordsArthur’s life came to an end two weeks ago at a time and place of his choosing, 1but his legacy will continue for decades.Founder of the Leo Baeck Day School, Mazon Canada and Campaign Against Child Poverty, he served as rabbi and rabbi emeritus at Temple Emanu-El in North York for 58 years.23He was awarded the Order of Canada for his extraordinary contributions to the Jewish community and decades of interfaith work on poverty, hunger and social inequality.4Thanks · 22 wordsI will always be inspired by his work; his wit, even his bad jokes; his moral courage; his intelligence and his integrity.ThanksAnecdote · 10 wordsI just wanted one more cup of coffee with him.AnecdoteThanks · 13 wordsOur country is richer for the life and work of Rabbi Arthur Bielfeld, ThanksAside · 8 wordsbut I hope heaven is ready for him.Aside