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Taleeb Noormohamed

176 words · 13 sentences · 14 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 47 wordsearlier this month, I attended the blessing ceremony of Sen̓áḵw, a housing development in my riding of Vancouver Granville. When complete, Sen̓áḵw will bring more than 6,000 rental homes to Vancouver open to everyone, including much-needed affordable and below-market housing units for families, workers and newcomers alike.2 Positioning · 12 wordsHowever, Sen̓áḵw is more than a housing project. It is a homecoming.Positioning Claims · 38 wordsMore than a century after Squamish families were forcibly removed from their ancestral village, the Squamish nation gathered once again on their land.3 They gathered with elders. They gathered in language, in song, in ceremony and in strength. Anecdote · 12 wordsI was honoured to be a witness to that ceremony, that blessing, AnecdoteClaims · 25 wordsas the first tower prepares to welcome families into 333 new homes.1 It is high-quality housing. It is affordable housing on prime land in Vancouver. Positioning · 8 wordsAbove all else, it is reconciliation in action.Positioning Reasoning · 34 wordsSen̓áḵw reminds us that when we work with first nations, when first nations lead and we partner, we do more than build homes. We build trust, we restore belonging and we build the future.

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