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Steven MacKinnon

55 words · 3 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Michelle Rempel Garner (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I am going to take that as a “No, I cannot do my job and will not show up for work for four hours.” I understand why the minister does not want to show up for four hours. In the last two weeks alone, there have been multiple cases of sweetheart deals for non-citizens convicted of serious crimes. Terrorists are still in Canada, and money is being poured into refugee hotels. I will ask again, will the Minister of Immigration show up for the full four hours on Thursday night and be held to account for her terrible decisions?”
Statement grade
D+
54 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 36%Claims 15%The question 49%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 13 wordsthe minister recites the formidable accomplishments that are being realized under her tenure: PositioningClaims · 8 wordsImmigration is down, 1and asylum seekers are down.2 Positioning · 7 wordsThere are incredible accomplishments of the minister.PositioningPartly on point The question · 27 wordsThe real question is, when will the member stop with the degrading and very condescending questioning that she continues to put, without any foundation, to the minister?Off point

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