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Gérard Deltell

100 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Martin Champoux (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank my Conservative colleague for his speech, which I missed. I was going to ask him to give me a five-minute summary of his speech this morning, but I nevertheless agree with him on several points. The government recently secured a majority. It is only fair to question the manoeuvring that led to this outcome. The government prepared an economic update without consulting the opposition parties or considering any requests that might have come from the other parties, which are doing their work thoroughly. Now we have an economic update that does not include adequate support measures for businesses in the regions, particularly in the manufacturing sector. I would like to hear my colleague’s thoughts on how the government handled the economic update. Why is there nothing concrete in it to help businesses in the regions?”
Statement grade
B
77 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 12%Claims 62%Reasoning 12%Aside 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 12 wordsI would like to thank my colleague; his questions are always pertinent.Thanks Claims · 30 wordsIt is indeed a pity that the government, which has now been in office for over a year, has not gone to the trouble of engaging with the opposition parties, 1Reasoning · 12 wordswhich is absolutely essential, particularly in the case of a minority government. Claims · 32 wordsThat said, for the past few weeks, there has been talk of it being a majority government. It is a defector-led majority. It is a majority government made up of floor crossers.2Partly on point Aside · 14 wordsIt is funny; I think it sounds quite good in both English and French.Aside

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