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Greg McLean

185 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Rhonda Kirkland (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, we are all up here and have lots of questions for this member, so I am grateful that you called on me. Last Friday, I spent some time with the International Brotherhood of Electrical Workers in Oshawa, and we talked about money for the trades. I can appreciate that they are giving the Liberals some props for putting money towards that, but they have a real concern, and I have one too: What about jobs? We are going to spend all this money on trades. It is great to invest in trades, but these folks need jobs when they are trained, and right now the electrical workers and folks in my riding are very concerned about that. I wonder if the member could comment on that.”
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Average 86 / 100
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Procedure 2%Claims 78%Reasoning 5%Promise 15%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordsit is very important.Procedure Claims · 66 wordsThe government talks about training people, but it does not talk about how that is actually going to fit into the economy. I know the Prime Minister made an announcement while we were not sitting in the House of Commons last week about building our electricity system across Canada.1 Talking about the International Brotherhood of Electrical Workers, we know they are going to need those jobs. Reasoning · 9 wordsI think we have to take a good look. Claims · 79 wordsAs I said earlier, the government has caused the problem with the electricity system in Canada because it inherited a bunch of policy advisers from the Government of Ontario who more or less botched the electricity system in Ontario for a decade.2 Then they moved to Ottawa and decided to botch it even further. All they seem to be able to do is add a whole bunch of money into the equation whenever those messes seem evident to everybody.Partly on pointUnearned certainty Promise · 27 wordsWe have to make sure we have a real solution here that gets people working and actually gets an electricity system that works for the whole country.

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