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Scot Davidson

103 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada now has some of the highest household debt and least affordable housing in the G7. Food bank use is at a record high. Seniors are skipping meals. Young families are delaying having children. Working parents are choosing between groceries, rent and medication. However, I have heard the Liberals say over and over today that they are improving affordability and that Canada’s economy is doing great. My question is simple. If life is supposedly getting better, why are so many Canadians feeling like they are falling further behind every single month?”
Statement grade
D–
44 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 4%Claims 72%Anecdote 24%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 4 wordsmy colleague is right.Positioning Claims · 4 wordsCanadians are flat broke. Anecdote · 25 wordsI spent time in the riding over these last two weeks. I could not believe the stories people and small business owners were telling me.Anecdote Claims · 70 wordsAs an aside, and I have spoken about this a number of times, we have been waiting 10 years for natural gas lines in my riding and for phase three hydro so small businesses can start.1 People are coming to me, frustrated, asking, “Why are we sending all this money overseas? Why am I on the outside looking in when all I am trying to do is just get ahead?”Off point

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