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Arpan Khanna

122 words · 6 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Marie-Hélène Gaudreau (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, the question I would like to ask my colleague— Mr. Speaker, it is true that seniors are facing difficulties. We have been saying for many years that seniors aged 65 to 74 are being discriminated against by the government, and we expected that this situation would be rectified. Instead of offering a poisoned chalice in the form of election-time handouts, the government could have helped people in this age group. What are my colleague’s thoughts on that?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 62%Claims 38%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 46 wordsI do agree with my colleague that under the Liberal government, seniors have been pushed right to the back. The Liberals talk a big game, but they do not have the human decency to stand in the House and accept that their policies are hurting seniors.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsOne in 10 seniors is now going to the food banks.1 That is not me saying that; it is the facts in our communities.Unearned certainty Positioning · 30 wordsInstead of the Liberals’ just issuing press releases, if they actually cared about seniors, stood up for them and supported them, we would not have the crisis we have today.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 22 wordsThe economic statement could have helped them, but again it is helping Liberal insiders, while seniors are being forced to homeless encampments.2

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