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Caroline Desrochers

102 words · 4 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Warren Steinley (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if my kids gave me that answer when I asked them a question, I would be bitterly disappointed. It is always someone else’s fault with these Liberals. It is never their fault. Regarding gasoline prices, they say, “It is not our fault. We took the tax off.” However, there is not a place in the country where the price of gas is lower than it was before. They only went a third of the way. They could have taken off all the tax on all the gas for the year, but they did not. With respect to home prices, they say, “We are going to build homes at speeds never seen before, generational speeds.” Fewer houses are being built in Canada this year than were built last year. You are failing at everything, and it is always someone else’s fault. The parliamentary secretary could give me another answer, but I am guessing she will say the dog ate her homework.”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 27%Positioning 28%Promise 44%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 28 wordsthe measures in the recent spring economic update are part of the next step in our plan to build a stronger, more independent and resilient Canada for all, Vague promisePositioning · 12 wordsbecause we do have a plan on this side of the House.Positioning Promise · 45 wordsIt would advance our progress in building more affordable homes and the major infrastructure that transforms and connects our economy, Vague promisewhile bringing down costs to help people get ahead.Vague promise It would help businesses seize new opportunities and give families the confidence to plan their future.Partly on pointVague promise Positioning · 17 wordsIt would build a Canada that is not just strong, but good; not just prosperous, but fair.PositioningOff point

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