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Eric Lefebvre

90 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to François-Philippe Champagne (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I am pleased to hear from my colleague this morning, but I am a little surprised by his comments. The people in his riding are capable of keeping things in perspective. First, I want to congratulate him on becoming a grandfather. He will be happy to know that we are going to build the strongest economy in the G7 for his grandson or granddaughter. We know people are watching us at home, and I am sure my colleague will record today’s proceedings. How will he explain to the people in his riding why he and his party voted against the affordability measures? Is he going to vote against the measure to ensure that, on June 5, people in his riding will receive the Canada groceries and essentials benefit? This is a measure that will help 12 million Canadians, including people in his riding. Can he tell them today on camera whether he will vote in favour of this measure, which will help people in his riding?”
Statement grade
C
60 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 53%Positioning 47%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 31 wordsI want to start by saluting the people of Richmond—Arthabaska, who placed their trust in a Conservative MP.1 That is the choice the people of Richmond—Arthabaska made in the last election.Off point Positioning · 17 wordsThey made that choice because they are sick and tired of watching the Liberals spend so recklessly.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsAfter a decade of Liberal government management, the country’s debt grew from $700 billion to $1.4 trillion, 2Positioning · 25 wordsand the Liberals are still racking up charges on our children’s and future grandchildren’s credit card. The people of Richmond—Arthabaska know this has to stop.PositioningPartly on pointUnearned certainty

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