“Madam Chair, the minister is allocating $710 million in additional funding to Alto, which is still officially called VIA HFR after a project that was scrapped at the last minute. I would like to know whether he is aware of how much of that amount will be used to pay for the expropriation of land, particularly in Mirabel, and how much of that amount will be used for Alto’s advertising blitz, as this company has effectively become a communications firm.”
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Madam Chair, Claims · 94 wordsI believe it is common knowledge that there is a connection between this company and me.Unearned certaintyWhat I can say is that this government is proud to be making generational investments in infrastructure from coast to coast to coast.Vague promiseI believe my colleague has noted that some of the major projects we need to carry out across this country include investments in housing, investments in infrastructure and investments in innovation and productivity.That is exactly what we have done.On a cash basis, we are talking about close to $450 billion over five years.1Positioning · 5 wordsThese are truly generational investments.PositioningPartly on point