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François-Philippe Champagne

98 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Carlos Leitão (Liberal)
“Mr. Chair, the economic update includes many measures, but I would like to focus on one in particular and ask the minister if he can comment on it. Unfortunately, we do not have much time. I am thinking in particular of the investment fund, the Canada Strong fund, which I think is an excellent idea. Could the minister comment on that?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 69 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%Positioning 48%Claims 46%

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Mr. Chair, Procedure · 6 words30 seconds is not very long, ProcedurePositioning · 20 wordsbecause building Canada strong obviously requires a strong team Canada, a strong team of workers who will build this country.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 45 wordsThe sovereign wealth fund is a unique opportunity to build collective wealth, but in a very Canadian way, since it will enable ordinary people, that is, individual investors, to invest in and own part of this collective wealth that we are going to create together.1Vague promise Positioning · 27 wordsI think it is a great initiative. It is typical of Canada to want to build. That is why we want to build Canada strong for all.PositioningVague promise

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