“Mr. Chair, the contractor worked for Alto and then worked on the budget presentation that included details about Alto, and money and implementation legislation for Alto. Does the minister recognize that this is a conflict of interest, and were measures taken to prevent that? Was the Ethics Commissioner informed that this contractor was also concurrently employed by Alto?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 77. The grade is held to 72, 30 above Relevance.
72 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 30%Reasoning 25%Claims 38%Promise 8%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Chair, Positioning · 24 wordslike all my colleagues here, in the years I have served in the House, I have always treated my colleagues with the utmost respect.PositioningReasoning · 14 wordsI believe that all members of the House are entitled to the same respect.Off pointClaims · 18 wordsI have already stated on several occasions that I have complied with all the rules required by law.Promise · 6 wordsI will continue to do so, Reasoning · 6 wordsas I am required to do, Claims · 12 wordsand as all my colleagues in the House are required to do.Partly on point