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François-Philippe Champagne

54 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Sandra Cobena (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, the minister assures Canadians that it will be independent. Who will appoint these independent board members?”
Statement grade
C
Average 64 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 15%Promise 65%Positioning 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Procedure · 8 wordsas I have said time and time again, ProcedurePromise · 14 wordsand we have been very clear, the fund will be independent from the government.Vague promise Positioning · 11 wordsWe know this is a very important feature of this fund.Positioning Promise · 21 wordsIt is going to be at arm’s length from the government.Vague promise It will make its investment decisions in accordance with the—Partly on point

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