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François-Philippe Champagne

63 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Jasraj Hallan (Conservative)
“Mr. Chair, Nordic wealth funds are run with surpluses or royalties from resource revenues. This fund that the minister is creating is going to be funded by debt. Why?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
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The ask 21%Claims 40%Positioning 32%Procedure 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, The ask · 13 wordsI would invite my colleague to look at a number of sovereign funds. Claims · 25 wordsThere are different models around the world. Like I said, this is going to be an instrument that is going to create wealth for Canadians.Vague promise Positioning · 20 wordsI do not understand why the member would talk down the fact that we are creating collective wealth for Canadians.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 5 wordsI hope that my colleague—Procedure

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