“Mr. Chair, I will be splitting my time with the hon. member for Saanich—Gulf Islands. Federal civil servants working partly from home are being— Mr. Chair, federal civil servants working partly from home are being forced to return full-time to an office, even where there is no place to put them. There is no compelling reason to work from an office. It will negatively affect their quality of life and productivity, and it will cost the government more money. Why are Liberals pursuing a policy that is so irrational?”
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Claims 64%Positioning 36%
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Mr. Chair, Claims · 27 wordswe have taken measures to have civil servants return to the office.1Vague promiseI think these measures are in line with the best practices seen in the industry.Positioning · 15 wordsWe have done that in a compassionate and reasonable way to make sure that people—Positioning