“Mr. Chair, I ask the hon. minister if he would not agree with me that we have seen a steady stream of efforts to get Canadians corporations to invest in themselves and reinvest in R and D, and it is a string of failures, as David Dodge pointed out. The tools that we have tried just have not worked, and then people tend to turn on the corporate sector, which it does not appreciate. They say that the sector is not investing in itself and it is its fault. I am just hoping that we can learn lessons from the past and decide that it is time to ensure that we actually use Canadian workers in Canada to further process our raw materials and not ship them out raw. Might the government be thinking of putting in some measures that would encourage that?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 72 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 40%Promise 10%Claims 38%Reasoning 12%
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Mr. Chair, Positioning · 5 wordsmy colleague is so right.PositioningPromise · 17 wordsWe want to do more transformation, Vague promiseand I think she will be happy with team Canada strong.Claims · 28 wordsThe fact is that we say we are going to train and help 80,000 to 100,000 young people with their Red Seal and to get into the trades, 1Reasoning · 21 wordsbecause if we want to build this country, we need young people.We need young people to get into the trades.Claims · 31 wordsThis is going to help provide more opportunities for young people in this country to participate in building this country at a speed and scale we have not seen in generations.Positioning · 27 wordsWe are very much focused on the youth.We are very much focused on helping workers.We are very much focused on working with unions as well.PositioningClaims · 7 wordsThey do great work in training workers.Positioning · 37 wordsWe want to build together, Vague promisebecause we want to build a Canada for all.That is why we are focusing on workers, on young people and on small and medium-sized businesses to help us build this country.PositioningPartly on point