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David McGuinty

80 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Jacob Mantle (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, to describe a gullible listener, we used to say, “I have some swampland in Florida for you.” Now, thanks to the Minister of Defence, we can say a Canadian version: “I have a gravel pit in Nova Scotia for you.” At the low cost of just $200 million, the Liberals are trying to build a spaceport. The problem is that the company that is leasing it is paying just $13,000, and construction will cost only $70 million. If the construction is $70 million, and the lease is only $13,000, why are Canadians forking out $200 million?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%Claims 88%Positioning 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordsI have really good news.Procedure Claims · 70 wordsToday we announced our commitment to procure the GlobalEye, Saab’s airborne early warning and control aircraft platform.1 This investment will open new opportunities for Canadian workers, and it is projected to create 3,000 jobs in the Canadian aerospace and defence sector.2 This is going to be a key resource for the Canadian Armed Forces to enhance our North American security by detecting and deterring threats across the Arctic and beyond. Positioning · 5 wordsWe are just getting started.PositioningOff pointVague promise

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