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David McGuinty

98 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Fraser Tolmie (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, after much hype, the Minister of National Defence paraded the Snowbirds in front of the media for all of Canada to see. He then shamefully announced that the Snowbird team was grounded after the 2026 season and that the people behind them were losing their jobs. Which Liberal government was wrong, the one that spent $30 million to keep them flying or the one that is prematurely grounding them? Both L3Harris and Magellan Aerospace, who inspected the jets, say the Tutors are safe to fly until 2030. Was the squadron ever asked if the team could fly until 2030?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 70%Positioning 17%Promise 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 22 wordsour government is taking action to ensure that Canadians can continue to enjoy the iconic nine-plane Snowbird formation for generations to come, Vague promisePositioning · 17 wordsand the member knows that.Partly on point Instead of hyping things up, why does he not work with us?PositioningOff point Claims · 47 wordsWe announced a commitment to procure the CT-157, the Pilatus C-21, that will serve both the future Snowbirds team and pilot training.1 This new capability will be based at 15 Wing Moose Jaw, Saskatchewan, 2and is expected to be operational by the latest in the early 2030s. Promise · 12 wordsWe intend to procure these aircraft quickly and we will do so.Partly on point

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