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David McGuinty

93 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Fraser Tolmie (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if they are safe to fly now, why are they not safe to fly next year? The Liberal government took over a decade to sign the F-35 contract, which is now under review and delayed. If the Snowbird replacement follows that timeline, the team will not fly again until the 2040s. For 55 years, the Snowbirds have been a jet team. The replacement the minister has announced is a propeller aircraft. Who made the decision not to pick jets?”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Positioning 20%Promise 72%Claims 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 19 wordswhat we will not do on this side of the House is take our lead from social media sites.Positioning Promise · 19 wordsWhat we will do is work with the Royal Canadian Air Force.Vague promise We will listen to the experts there.Vague promise Claims · 7 wordsThat is exactly what we have done. Promise · 48 wordsAs the air force advances its air and space modernization efforts, we remain firmly committed to a future air demonstration capability that continues this proud legacy.Vague promise Canadians across North America can look forward to the Snowbirds’ distinctive nine-plane formation for generations to come in an outstanding replacement plane.

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