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Steven Guilbeault

808 words · 36 sentences · 51 clauses

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Anecdote 27%Claims 47%Aside 4%Reasoning 7%Procedure 1%Positioning 6%Thanks 8%Promise 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 217 wordsa few months after I turned 25, I embarked on my first overseas trip, one that, without my knowing it, would set the course of my entire life. I was heading to Berlin for what was then a little-known gathering: the very first conference of parties on climate change, COP1.1 History was being made, and I was lucky enough to be in the room. Like many of my peers at the time, I was setting off for the old world with my backpack, but unlike them, I was not going to be backpacking across Europe. Instead, I slept on a gymnasium floor with 600 young people from all over the world in what had, a few years earlier, been East Berlin. We had a common goal: to convince governments around the world to agree on an ambitious plan to tackle climate change. The experience made me realize not only how crucial the climate crisis and, as I would later discover, the nature crisis are, but also how important international collaboration is to finding solutions to these complex issues. Over the next two decades, I channelled this conviction into environmental work with NGOs, advocating for change, mobilizing support and building bridges between science, civil society and public policy. It was this experience that ultimately led me to politics.Anecdote Claims · 202 wordsIn 2019, then prime minister Justin Trudeau asked me to join the Liberal team to help accelerate action on climate change.2 When I became environment minister, my mandate included developing Canada’s first comprehensive climate plan to meet our international obligations. We also developed the country’s first comprehensive adaptation plan to prepare and protect Canadians from the dangers of a changing climate, changes that we can no longer avoid, and those plans were working. These plans, through policies, regulations and legislation, have been designed to ensure that Canada makes its fair contribution to reducing pollution and protecting Canadians from the devastation we are already seeing in communities from coast to coast to coast. Before making the final decision to run, there was one thing I asked: the ability to distance myself from the decision by the government to purchase the Trans Mountain pipeline. As an environmentalist with deep understanding of the scientific consensus on the urgency and need to rapidly reduce heat-trapping gases, I had opposed a number of oil and gas projects and had criticized the Trudeau government for moving ahead with the purchase of TMX.3 Many of my political opponents have used these positions to try to portray me as anti-development. Aside · 8 wordsThat has always made me smile a little, AsideClaims · 75 wordsbecause throughout my professional career, I have championed numerous development projects across the country, such as wind and solar projects, public transit and active mobility initiatives, the electrification of our public transit system, including boosting sales of electric vehicles, and, more recently, the high-speed rail project. I was onstage in Edmonton in 2015 when then NDP premier Rachel Notley announced her climate leadership plan.45 Again I was roundly criticized by some environmentalists for doing so, Reasoning · 19 wordsbut I have always believed in collaborating with provinces within the framework of the scientific reality of climate change.Off point Procedure · 5 wordsMuch has changed since then.Procedure Claims · 43 wordsJust 10 years ago, for every dollar invested worldwide in fossil fuel production, another dollar was invested in clean and renewable technologies.6 Today, that ratio is two to one in favour of renewable energy.7 Last year, global electric vehicle sales reached nearly 23%.8 Reasoning · 36 wordsThere are not many reasons that lead people to enter politics. In my case, it was a desire to pursue my quest for a better environment, for the fight against climate change, and for nature protection. Claims · 17 wordsThese intense, demanding and deeply meaningful seven years have been among the most formative of my life. Positioning · 9 wordsI leave proud of what we have accomplished together.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsAfter nearly seven years serving as the member for the beautiful riding of Laurier—Sainte‑Marie, the time has come for me to seek new avenues to continue my life’s work.9 I will therefore be resigning my seat in the House later this summer.10Off point Thanks · 46 wordsI am profoundly grateful to my children, family, friends, staff and constituents, as well as volunteers, many of whom have come to Ottawa today to be with us and who have made this work possible. They gave me far more than I can ever give back.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Aside · 28 wordsI will not mention the fact that some of them may be here in the House, because you would tell me I am not allowed to do that.Aside Positioning · 39 wordsThe journey that began in Berlin more than 30 years ago is not over. It is simply continuing in another direction, with the same urgency and renewed hope. The fight for our planet is the struggle of our generation, PositioningPromise · 7 wordsand I fully intend to keep fighting.Off pointVague promise Thanks · 15 wordsIt has been the honour of my life to represent my community and my country.Thanks

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