“Madam Speaker, it is really incredible listening to the way the government talks about the youth unemployment crisis, because fundamentally it seems that it does not understand the task. The task is to address the youth unemployment rate. It is to address the fact that we have a high and climbing youth unemployment rate. It is to address the fact that youth employment is at one of its lowest points in decades. It is to address the real facts on the ground. In response to these questions, the government never actually talks about the youth unemployment rate. It never points to success in terms of, in aggregate, getting more young people into work. It always wants us to be impressed by the amount of money it is spending, by the fact that it is continuing existing programs and by the fact that it has hopes and ambitions for things that it might do later on. Can the member acknowledge that it is not working and that the youth unemployment rate is high and increasing, that their plans are not achieving the—”
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Anecdote 32%Claims 35%Reasoning 27%Promise 6%
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Madam Speaker, Anecdote · 58 wordsI was in the home province of the member opposite just last week.1I was meeting with the Southern Alberta Institute of Technology, talking about the amazing work that is being done there to graduate young people into the trades.2It is work that we continue to build on.Vague promiseJust yesterday, I met with the Canadian Apprenticeship Forum.3AnecdoteClaims · 64 wordsThey called our investments in the spring economic statement a project that made them feel heard.4They said that their concerns about how we increase the number of apprentices and increase the number of skilled trade workers across the country are being focused on, and that these are incredible concrete initiatives to improve the recruitment, retention and training of our skilled workers in Canada.5Reasoning · 50 wordsWe are making these investments precisely because we know that the future of our country’s economy, the future of our workforce and the future of so many young Canadians looking to build careers in good-paying jobs depend on our ability to have a skilled trades workforce that meets our needs.Promise · 11 wordsThat is exactly what we are going to continue to do.Partly on pointVague promise