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Shelby Kramp-Neuman

178 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Amarjeet Gill (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the hon. member is a wonderful member of Parliament and a passionate public servant. Canadians are already struggling with rising costs. Every industry is struggling to survive. Now the Liberal government wants to make streaming services more expensive through its so-called streaming tax. Why is the government punishing families with another tax while affordability is already challenging for Canadian families?”
Statement grade
D–
40 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 62%Reasoning 5%The ask 29%Positioning 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 76 wordsevery single time I am back in the riding and throughout the weeks when I am serving the people in the House of Commons in Ottawa, I continuously listen to the concerns of Canadians.Off point In concert with working on the file as shadow minister of Canada-U.S. trade, I am continuously reminded of the hardships that Canadians are facing, especially in the industries affected by the tariffs and the pending CUSMA review.Partly on point July 1 is a benchmark, 1Reasoning · 9 wordsbut we need to move forward with specific action. The ask · 17 wordsWe need to lose the rhetoric, lose the noise, get to the table and have a conversation. Claims · 10 wordsMexico is at the table. Mexico is having a conversation. The ask · 30 wordsI urge the Minister of Canada-U.S. Trade to do what he does best, to sit down and work this out, in coordination with a willing shadow minister of Canada-U.S. trade. Positioning · 6 wordsWe are able to work together.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsWe have a lot of people at the table, a lot of stakeholders with a lot of expertise, who are willing to make this work. The ask · 5 wordsLet us get it done.Off point

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