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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
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This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 120 wordsthe world lost a hero on Monday, May 18.Randy Eric Dickinson passed away in Fredericton at the age of 71.1Randy was a tireless advocate for accessibility and inclusion for people with disabilities.He served as the first executive director of the Premier’s Council on Disabilities and as chairperson of the New Brunswick Human Rights Commission, among countless other roles.3His work shaped New Brunswick’s Accessibility Act and the federal Accessible Canada Act.In recognition of his dedication, he was appointed to the Order of Canada and the Order of New Brunswick.2Randy is survived by his beloved wife Karen and a large, loving family.He was passionate about helping others, whether through policy or simple acts of kindness.Thanks · 9 wordsPlease join me in honouring such a dedicated advocate, ThanksPromise · 8 wordsand let us build on Randy’s incredible legacy.Vague promise