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Caroline Desrochers

114 words · 11 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Gabriel Hardy (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, while 2.2 million Canadians have been lining up at food banks in just one month, our Prime Minister has spent more than $520,000 on inflight meals provided by luxury caterers. This year, 22% of Canadians have lost weight because they cannot afford enough to eat. Meanwhile, 40,000 feet up in the air, our Prime Minister is being served beef tenderloin with bordelaise sauce, veal cutlets, Scottish salmon, crème brûlée, and fine wines. When the Liberals tell Canadians they have to make sacrifices, do the Prime Minister and his inner circle consider themselves Canadians, or do they think they are above that?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 50%Claims 46%Procedure 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 39 wordsthe Conservatives think that if they repeat their message day after day, Canadians will eventually believe that they truly care about affordability.Off point On this side of the House, we are working on real measures to tackle the affordability issue.PositioningVague promise Claims · 53 wordsWe have eliminated the gas tax.1 We have introduced the Canada groceries and essentials benefit and the Canada national school food program.2 We are accelerating the construction of affordable housing. We are protecting jobs in the industries most affected by tariffs. We are promoting training programs.Partly on point The Conservatives voted against all those measures.3 Positioning · 13 wordsNo one believes that the Conservatives are there to help the most vulnerable.PositioningOff point Procedure · 4 wordsLet us be serious.Procedure Positioning · 5 wordsThey should get to work.PositioningOff point

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