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Yves Perron

187 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Claude DeBellefeuille (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to ask my colleague to talk about what SMEs in Quebec really need. We know that the Bloc Québécois is very close to businesses in our communities, which have a different approach than the rest of Canada. What we are hearing from these business people is that the measures currently in place are not adapted to their reality. Businesses are closing and the regions are in a precarious economic situation. What could the government have done to prevent this situation?”
Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 42%Reasoning 11%Procedure 12%Positioning 12%The ask 23%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 11 wordsfor one, it could have done more than just provide loans, Reasoning · 8 wordsbecause, eventually, a company’s debt level rises dramatically. Procedure · 6 wordsI just mentioned the wage subsidy.Procedure Claims · 36 wordsWhat a wonderful way to preserve the economic fabric of the regions by maintaining the employment relationship between the worker and the company, even if production has to slow down or operations have to stop temporarily. Positioning · 22 wordsIt seems that the government’s current intention is to see small businesses disappear and for everything to be concentrated in large companies, PositioningClaims · 8 wordsbecause the focus is on helping large companies. Procedure · 17 wordsI hope that is not the case, but I feel I need to raise the issue publicly.Procedure The ask · 7 wordsI would like an answer on that.Off point Claims · 24 wordsOrdinary people in the regions are asking us for help, asking us for support, and the government should be more present than it is. The ask · 36 wordsAt the very least, I urge the government to sit down with us so that we can discuss potential solutions. If it does not like this solution, let us find another one that will suit everyone. Reasoning · 12 wordsThat is how government is supposed to work for the common good.Partly on point

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