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Sherry Romanado

103 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Bruce Fanjoy (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the Victoria Cross is the highest military honour Canada awards for acts of extraordinary valour. It was created in 1993, yet has never been awarded. Constituents in my riding are calling for an independent review of military decorations from the Afghanistan mission. The time for action is now. Can the Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister of National Defence inform this House how the government is committed to a fair and transparent process to honour the valour of our veterans?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 15%Thanks 17%Claims 19%Promise 50%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordshonouring bravery and sacrifice in service to Canada is among our government’s most solemn responsibilities.PositioningPartly on point Thanks · 17 wordsWe are profoundly grateful to all those who have served and who continue to serve our country.Thanks Claims · 20 wordsMilitary honours, including Canada’s Victoria Cross, are subject to a thorough and rigorous review process by the Canadian Armed Forces. Promise · 51 wordsI can confirm that the government agrees to the establishment of an independent military honours review board to review Afghanistan veteran cases where new evidence may suggest that the criteria for the Victoria Cross may have been met.1 I look forward to providing further updates to this House in due course.Partly on pointVague promise

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