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Marc Miller

131 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, Canada is the only G7 country that is in a recession. More than 112,000 Canadians have lost their job in just a few months. Food banks are reaching record levels of usage. Families are struggling to pay their mortgage, their rent and even their grocery bill. At a time like this, Canadians would expect members of Parliament to be debating solutions. They would expect their elected representatives to be examining every line of this massive omnibus bill and asking hard questions about it. Instead, the Liberals have decided to shut down debate after only three hours of debate on billions of dollars. If the government’s plan is working, why are Canadians falling behind, and if the government is so confident in its plan, why is it so afraid of letting Parliament debate it?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 15%Reasoning 15%Procedure 11%Claims 60%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsagain the Conservatives’ actions speak louder than their words.Positioning Reasoning · 20 wordsThey would not have put forward the amendment they are proposing if they wanted to continue debate on the budget. Positioning · 10 wordsThe Conservatives do not believe what we have to say, PositioningProcedure · 14 wordsso let me quote Bloomberg as to what its people thought about the budget: ProcedureClaims · 78 words“Canada’s government is taking aim at competition in the financial sector, pledging to tackle fees, make it easier for consumers to switch banks and reduce regulatory burdens for smaller lenders.”1 The Council of Canadian Innovators said, “Today’s budget represents an important step toward building trust with Canada’s innovators and the broader business community.2 For the first time, we’re seeing the federal government embrace a serious conversation about economic sovereignty—and that shift in focus is both welcome and overdue.”Partly on point

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