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Marc Miller

124 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, the minister is responsible for heritage in Canada, and I want to recognize that June 1 is day one of Filipino Heritage Month. Winnipeg North is the centre of the heart of the Filipino community in Canada. It does not matter where. From coast to coast to coast, we will witness all forms of celebration of Filipino heritage. Given that the minister represents heritage, I wonder if he could provide his thoughts on how important it is to recognize Canada’s diversity, from the perspective of the budget. I would ask him to share his thoughts on the importance of recognizing our diversity.”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 61%Claims 16%Aside 23%

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Madam Speaker, Thanks · 26 wordsfirst and foremost, I would like to wish a great Filipino Heritage Month to everyone celebrating and to all Canadians, whether they are Filipino or not.Thanks Claims · 20 wordsThis is a community that has grown, I think, to well over a million strong over the last few years: 1Off pointAside · 28 wordsa million and one, if we count the member for Winnipeg North, who appears to be an honorary member of the Filipino community and certainly behaves as such.Aside Thanks · 50 wordsHe has been a fierce defender of their rights and has magnified their struggle to be in Canada and to thrive as Canadian citizens. I wish all of those celebrating a great Filipino Heritage Month as we celebrate this month of June, recognizing their contributions to Canada, present and future.Thanks

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