Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 5%Claims 39%Thanks 43%Positioning 13%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 3 wordshappy Pride Month.GreetingClaims · 45 wordsThis month, we celebrate the joy, courage and resilience of queer, trans and two-spirited communities across Canada.Pride is a celebration, but it is also a protest.It was born from people standing up and demanding dignity, equality and freedom to live openly as themselves.Thanks · 50 wordsThat is why I am especially proud to congratulate Pride Corner in my constituency.For five years, Pride Corner has rejected hate and brought people together in community and joy.1To every queer, trans and two-spirited person in this country, they are loved, they belong and they are not alone.ThanksGreeting · 3 wordsHappy Pride Month.GreetingPositioning · 15 wordsBe proud, be loud and let us keep fighting for a better future for all.PositioningVague promise