Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Heather McPherson

116 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

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Greeting 5%Claims 39%Thanks 43%Positioning 13%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 3 wordshappy Pride Month.Greeting Claims · 45 wordsThis month, we celebrate the joy, courage and resilience of queer, trans and two-spirited communities across Canada. Pride is a celebration, but it is also a protest. It was born from people standing up and demanding dignity, equality and freedom to live openly as themselves. Thanks · 50 wordsThat is why I am especially proud to congratulate Pride Corner in my constituency. For five years, Pride Corner has rejected hate and brought people together in community and joy.1 To every queer, trans and two-spirited person in this country, they are loved, they belong and they are not alone.Thanks Greeting · 3 wordsHappy Pride Month.Greeting Positioning · 15 wordsBe proud, be loud and let us keep fighting for a better future for all.PositioningVague promise

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